By the road to the contagious hospital
under the surge of the blue
mottled clouds driven from the
northeast—a cold wind. Beyond, the
waste of broad, muddy fields
brown with dried weeds, standing and fallen-“Spring and All”, lines 1-6
The opening stanza to Williams’ poem, “Spring and All,” exemplifies how the poem’s structure mimics the descriptions that the poem dictates. The image of “blue / mottled clouds” winds downwards and stands above “the / waste of broad, muddy fields,” both structurally and in actual resemblance to the nature—that the clouds in the sky reside above the “dried weeds, standing and fallen” in the brown field. This continues pretty consistently throughout the rest of the poem, especially seeing as the poem ends by stating, “Still, the profound change / has come upon them: rooted they / grip down and begin to awaken (lines 25-26). Otherwise stated, Williams’ intertwines his poetic framework around the meanings and images that he details, all of which put strong images in the readers mind and are linguistically playful, an artistic decision that was rather unconventional when juxtaposed with the normative poetic ideals that seeped from the 19th century into the early 20th century. And although he does hold a romantic tone throughout his work that bears some resemblance to Romantic Era poets such as Keats and Whitman—both of who were deeply inspiring and influential to his poetic style— William Carlos Williams throws in a modernist edge, using enjambment to create ambiguity and double meanings. For example, the first two lines seem to be connected, but because of the enjambment the reader can see those same lines as separate lines that are not directly connected.
This playful use of language reminds me of e.e. Cummings, the first modernist poet we read in this class, though Cummings uses different literary devices and avant-garde techniques to break the mold of the Romantic poets, who confined themselves to universal formats such as the sonnet structure. These modernist poets, Williams’ being one of the forefront poets of this era, demonstrates the rebellion against the status quo of poetry, and consequently revealing their complex American individualism and their approach to society—to change and alter it, whether out of distaste for America’s monotony or of the desolation that wreaked havoc on the American people—both soldiers and citizens—during WWI, the so-called “Great War.” Why it was so great, other than the great size of bleak turmoil that ensued—I have no clue. Perhaps it was the propaganda issued on the American people, propaganda that justified and covered up the violent truth about American life, both as a citizen and as a soldier of war.
Similarly, Williams’ touches on this American imperceptivity and blindness to the realities of their nation’s imperfections, particularly in “To Elsie”. The poem opens up by inferring that “pure products of America”—or plain white American folk with little to no cultural/ethnic roots—“go crazy,” then goes on to give various examples of this American lunacy. Sometimes Williams’ represents his idea of American craziness in the natural world, such as Jersey’s “isolated lakes and / valleys, its deaf-mutes,” with the isolated lakes directly opposing “its deaf-mutes,” a compounded word that Williams’ uses to describe the “valleys,” with their literal and figurative emptiness (lines 6-7). The valleys themselves are symbolic of the “pure products of America”—the cultureless Americans who he mentions in the first line—in that both the valleys and “pure” Americans are metaphorically empty, deaf and mute. Mute and deaf in that we lack self-expression, a theme that is recurrent throughout “To Elsie”; for instance, American’s hold “imaginations which have no / peasant traditions to give them / character / but flutter and flaunt / sheer rags—succumbing without / emotion / save numbed terror…which they cannot express” (lines 19-27). Plain old Americans, the pure products of the nation, all of those citizens who have lost their various ancestral cultures through the passage of time and the nations intrinsic freedom to escape any established cultures from which their ancestors moved away from. Yet how can one escape lunacy if he or she is not anchored to anything from the past, and is thus suspended in a mist of cultural obscurity. While some may argue that this escape from the cultures of past societies is a very American ideal, one that goes right along with rugged American individualism—being willfully separated from normal conventions of the past or present—the truth of the matter is that culture is an essential facet to seeing reality in its wholeness. This is why the “mountain folk from Kentucky,” who have surely separate themselves from past customs, embody this obliviously disoriented American who is blind sighted by a lack of connection with the truth of the land, truths which the poem says can only be seen by “some Elsie— / voluptuous water / expressing with broken / brain the truth about us” (40-43). Unlike rootless Americans, Elsie (via her broken brain) is able to express what they cannot—whether it be an expression of Nature, “some hedge of choke-cherry / or viburnum,” or an expression of one’s inner emotions and feelings (in this case, a terror that is numbly buried within the “pure products’” souls. People like Elsie are able to see the truth in Americans, as Williams ironically implies, because their minds are wired differently than usual (Elsie was mentally handicapped), thus separating her from the standard American. Elsie and other people who would not be labeled as pure American products, either due to immigration or any perceived imperfections, like mental disorders or differences in race. So in this sense, the outsiders are the only ones who are truly aware of the materialistic and degrading aspects of American society—a society that lacks any objective culture outside of the practical knowledge of agricultural and living. The insiders, then, are paradoxically less aware of America’s true state than those outsiders, such as Elsie.